We Interrupt Monday to Discuss Your Chin

Q: When do you want more customers?

  • Yesterday
  • Now
  • Tomorrow
  • Whenever it’s convenient for people
  • Hmmm…I’ll bet you didn’t choose the last option. Maybe that choice made you chuckle. It does sound funny.

    In reality, it’s no joke. If we agree this choice is ridiculous, why aren’t we working harder to create marketing messages that motivate our audience and demand action?

    No doubt, you’d like more work right now. Yesterday might be nice. Tomorrow is even better.

    Did the title of this post…with the strange word “Chin”, make you stop what you were doing to see what it was all about?

    The title uses a ‘trick’ that can help you get more business: the trick is to interrupt your customer’s train of thought, no matter what they might be doing…so the attention is on you, your company, your products and services.

    As a willful small child, my mother often reprimanded me by grabbing my little chin and turning my face to hers. As I grew, the chin grabbing ceased, replaced by a stern, “Look at me when I’m talking to you!” Without fail, I always got her message, loud and clear.

    What can you do to grab the virtual chins of your customers and demand attention? Perhaps more importantly, how can you help your clients grab their customers by the chin?

    The web landscape is strewn with millions of marketing messages, all vying for the same eyes. Your copywriting skills can make all the difference for your clients. Or not.

    Either way, pretty words are no longer enough.

    When your customer thinks about hiring you, he isn’t thinking about your copywriting skills. He’s thinking about results. His sole goal is to get his phone ringing, his email dinging and his shopping cart singing. He wants first-time customers to make a purchase, come back again and tell their friends. He wants the search engine spiders to find his web site, eat it up and spit it out, right onto page one.

    Think for a second: when your customer tells you, “You did a great job last time”, he’s essentially saying “I got great results and I want you to do that again.”

    That’s a high, scary mountain for any copywriter to climb. No wonder so many remain at the bottom, slaving away for pennies, held back from greatness by fear of failure.

    How would you react if suddenly someone yelled, Help!”, “Fire!”, or “Dial 911!” Just one or two tiny words…yet the immediacy, the urgency, is instantly conveyed.

    I think we’ll agree that humans are procrastinators. Your job is not to force the customer to take action. Rather, your job is to prevent the customer from inaction. They are not the same.

    A few tips:

  • Create an ‘act now!” perception in their customer’s mind, using the right words, at the right time
  • Don’t overdo it, as this will weaken the message
  • Take it easy with the exclamation points!
  • Create urgency with phrases like “don’t delay”, limited time offer”, “limited seating”, “reserve your space”, “this offer expires on…”, “while supplies last”, “one-day sale”, or be even more creative. The sky is the limit.
  • Few people want to be left out of a good thing. Make the customer think he just might be missing something.
  • Don’t forget the humble call to action phrase. People want to be told what to do. They are busy, overwhelmed, and in a rush, so make it super easy to place a phone call, fill out a form, request a demo, purchase a product, etc.
  • For more information, visit Marketing Experiments study, Testing the Power of Urgency on Offer Pages.

    24 Responses to “We Interrupt Monday to Discuss Your Chin”

    • Excellent post (and darn good headline), Victoria. I was actually pondering the same thing, while cradling my own chin this morning! :)

      This is practical information which all service providers, not just copywriters, can apply.

    • Thanks, Nichole! I always appreciate your support.

    • Outstanding title to your blog that summarized the whole point – it certainly caught my attention and made me click through on a busy morning! Thanks for the outstanding tips. Launching this week – I’ll use your advice!

    • Brad:

      Nicole,

      I would like to first say you know what your talking about when grabbing the attention of readers. Your title about “the chin” captivated me in finding out what you were saying.

      In the web world today, it is so difficult to capture the attention of readers and people looking to be customers. You idea is certainly one to ponder.

      Thanks again for the great reading.

      Brad

    • Huda Salih:

      Interesting post. You made me read your whole article even though I’m a little wary of reading list of advice on how to reach your customers. Yours are catchy and helpful. Thank you.

    • Lori:

      Loved your article! You have such good ideas for marketing, do you have any resources you could provide that would help me come up with a name for my new business?

    • Victoria, I read your posts no matter what they say. I can’t help myself.

    • It used to be a small child, a puppy, and/or the word “sex” was enough. Oh well, times are changing.

    • Great tips! Creating a sense of urgency is a must, but sometimes it can backfire if it’s not executed properly. Also, you want to make sure you stand out from other writers. What makes you unique? How are you different? What expertise do you bring to the table?

    • Superb post Victoria – spot on funny, clever and you make it sound so simple .. bookmarking you now!

    • Great writing. You caught my attention (during a busy day and when I have literally hundreds of emails sitting in my in-box).

      Keep up the good writing!

    • Brilliant topic, Victoria. Always a pleasure to read your LinkedIn posts – all very useful.

    • Thank you, Annie!

    • Thanks, Renata- So pleased my ‘evil plan’ worked :)

    • Thanks, Katherine! You’ll notice I often mention my mother :) who taught me so many lessons that apply today! Is this true for you as well?

    • Rebecca, I’m glad you brought these questions to the forefront. After several posts on the pros and cons of creating an UVP, USP, etc. it all comes down to the basics: can you answer the consumer’s question, “What’s in it for Me?”, and will they care about that answer in a way that sells products and services.

    • Thanks for the chuckle, Robert! You are so right! Some years back, if a woman showed her ankle, that was considered scandolous!

    • Thanks, Lee! I wondered if you were still out there! So happy my thoughts continue to be of value to you :)

    • Hi Lori. What type of business is it? This is something we should discuss privately. Are you aware of 30/30 Coaching? It’s highly affordable, $1 a minute, one-on-one phone coaching with me, where you can discuss any business challenge you are facing, and take advantage of my expertise. Since choosing a name requires brainstorming, name availability research both on and offline, and domain name research, as well as keyword considerations, you’re probably going to want help! On the blog’s home page is a tab for the program which will take you to the registration page. I’d love to help you!

    • Thank you too, Huda! Happy to have you here as a reader.

    • Thanks, Brad! It can be difficult to get people to sit up and take notice. While the title I chose is only one very basic way to do so, there are other ways to bring value in such a way that people feel compelled to stop what they are doing. In our noisy world, it is definitely an art worth learning!

    • Wonderful, Rebecca! Don’t be shy about asking for more tips as you move forward. I’m always here to help.

    • Excellent article Victoria. Thanks for the good information.

    • My pleasure, Jenni. What other topics would you like to read about?

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